Rough cuts feedback

In order to improve my magazine I have been told to improve on the following:

• For my front cover I need to make a banner for my bottom text so that it is more clear
• I need to produce a large sell line across the left hand side and middle of the magazine to improve its appearance
• For my contents page I need ensure that everything is aligned, I need to box it in or make a border to make it more clean cut and professional.
• I need to ensure that all images are in my magazine
• To make the font smaller preferably size 8 so that it is similar to a professional magazine and lastly for my contents to widen my band index to fill more of the page rather than there being unnecessary blank spaces.
• For my double page spread I need to make the images the same width apart, so that they are consistent with one and other
• I need to make the fond smaller to a size 8 or smaller to make it look more professional and I need more colour in the actual article to make the questions and answers clear.  

But overall my magazine is consistent and the photo shot was creative and interesting.